Strange.
Well uh.... I get the point, but as the guy before me said, its a weak point.
The animation is indeed unique, I like it. Keep up the good work on that, but try to think of something better for the script.
I'll probably forget about your animation tomorrow.
Here, let me use an exemple. Look at the great stuff that newgrounds has. Things that you will remember of:
The Composer
Breckenwood Series - Specially Waterlollies
Dare - Original and Remake
And other great movies...
What do they have in common? A point. A beautiful, strong, simple and easy to understand point. Something that makes you watch it over and over and never get bored.
Try something like that, mix up with your new artwork (work a little more on that) add some minutes to the animation.
With that you will defnatly get lots and lots of good reviews.
But cheers, nice music and nice drawing. And cheers again for the front page.